Kathy Carter (Cloud)

[Cloud]

Name: Kathy Carter
Age: 14, July 4th
Grade: 9th
Appearance: Tall, skinny, long brown hair(down to her waist) with red highlights, tanned, light blue eyes.
Personality: Kind, but sharp and mean when necisary (sometimes hse finds it neccisary to play dirty with her enemies). She daydreams (her heads in the clouds) alot so she adopted the name, Cloud
History: She has three sisters, but she got split up with two because they went to a diferent boarding school... Her parents couldn't afford to send all of them off to Rose Academy so they split them up and Kathy's other sisters are going to a very cheap boarding school...
Why they are being sent here: Her and her sisters wanted to go to a boarding school but ended up getting split in half because her parents couldn't afford to send all of their children to Rose Academy

[Holly]

•More details please. How short is her hair? What's her eye color?
•What are her hobbies? How mean can she be?
•HISTORY, does she have parents? Tell about her life, not just that she has three sisters...
•Did her parents have anything to do with the fact that she's being sent here? Her sisters didn't decide that she's going there, correct? Or did they? I would assume that her parents would have since she's being split apart from them, and if it was her decission to be split from them then there wouldn't be a sad face there, right?

[Cloud]

How about this?

[Holly]

XD

You didn't change the "why they are being sent here", and please make them complete sentences? I hope that's not to much to ask. =|